OMG, my Nana has a DROP DIED GORGEOUS!!! Nana has named him Riley. Riley has lots and lots of likes and dislikes.
Riley loves his tummy being robed and he loves to go for a morning run around in Nana's garden, Nana has a big backyard and and my sister Ashley and my other sister Jemma every Sunday go up o my Nanas . I love going up to my Nana because I love Spending time with with Riley because he is just the is the cutest puppy on this planet!
A rush job I think Georgia. The first sentence (could have been an excellent attention grabbing sentence) doesn't make sense. OMG has no place anywhere other than texting, "DIED" should be 'dead' and there is a missing word. These clues lead me to deduce that you were rushing!
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I can't wait to read more about the drop dead gorgeous puppy and what he doesn't like.
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