Bike,bike,bike. thats cycle sklls. On your bike safe is the most inpotid thing on your bike because it helps you to not foll off your bike and to keep you safe. Success is vear inpotid because it can help you achive your gols.
At cycle safe you need to keep listing and keep your self safe.When i went last time i cycle oved the wondin obstacle track and i feal off but lacaley i saty up gras just about came in my moth.
You seem to get the message that safety is important Amy. I like that you use a label too!
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ReplyDeleteSome of the story makes sense and some doesn't.
Spelling isn't too bad (don't forget to underline words that you need to check later).
Punctuation is excellent. Not enough background info for the reader to be sure what you are writing about.
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This was supposed to be a recount about something interesting that you did Amy. Choose one idea and write about it in detail.
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