This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted.
If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
In room 11 we have a online blog, we use 11s blog to help us write BUT WE HAVE TO MAKE IT MAKE SEENS!!! Its a bit heard for me. So now I need to make seens right now!!!
This has been written in too much of a hurry Cheyenne. It really doesn't make much sense and spelling mistakes don't help.
Introduce what the story is about. If the reader needs to know who, where, when, why or how, then introduce any of this information too.
Then write about one main idea or event and add details to paint a really clear picture (in words) and to keep the reader interested in what you are writing.
Think about the spelling in your writing. I also can't understand what you wrote, but besides that it sounds great!
ReplyDeleteThis has been written in too much of a hurry Cheyenne. It really doesn't make much sense and spelling mistakes don't help.
ReplyDeleteIntroduce what the story is about. If the reader needs to know who, where, when, why or how, then introduce any of this information too.
Then write about one main idea or event and add details to paint a really clear picture (in words) and to keep the reader interested in what you are writing.
Teach
I can see it is hard for you, but you are giving it a try and you chose a good photograph to go with it. Keep trying and read what Teach said.
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