Wof be quiet Pepper i'm trying to do my homework. I'm called Rosa as you can see i have a puppy called Pepper. Pepper allways barcks at nobody. it gets very annoying shes them. when my family where looking for a puppy we saw Peppers broher called spud. we where going to get spud but same body bet us to it. Pepper is ginger with hairs of blond. She has brond eyes. Pepper is one and a hale years old. Pepper gets into a lot of trouble at my house when me and my dog Pepper. Wof Wof.
By Rosa.
Nice attention grabbing 1st sentence Rosa. I like the personal voice you use. It's like you're talking to the reader(makes it interesting).
ReplyDeleteYour next step is to add more punctuation knowledge (exclamation marks, speech marks, commas and apostrophes). The start of your story should look like this:
"Woof"
"Be quiet Pepper, I'm trying to do my homework!"
I'm called Rosa. As you can see, I have a puppy called Pepper.
The other next step is paragraphs (should be 3 in this story).
Teach
Good post Rosa. Writing about your dog is such a good idea. The reader can tell that you love Pepper.
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