my fafrit ting to do at Sycle Safety is Zooming up the Seae Sore (seesaw). Man taking of and gowing in to mide ere when I LaND The Tirs falt Like get rokits anD when I PoLe on The Braks The Bike Thrns Too trgre in a Srcis man I Love Dowing thate
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Read what Teach thinks Ricky has meant to write.
My favourite thing to do at Cycle Safety was zooming up the seesaw.
Man, taking off and soaring into mid air! When I landed the tyres felt like they'd got rockets. Then when I piled (jammed) on the brakes the bike turned tight in a circle.
Man I love doing that!
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This is a writing test. Students were given 45 minutes to plan and draft a story recounting the best, or worst, thing that happened to them during Cycle Safety. The stories are assessed as 'draft writing' for how well they have been written for 'readers' understanding' and 'readers' interest'.
Readers' Understanding:
- Grammar (making sense).
- Accurate spelling.
- Accurate punctuation
- Background information (making sense).
- Writes about one main idea in detail at a time.
- Uses descriptive language.
- Uses language features (expressive language).
- Uses personal comments.
Understanding:
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2. 6/10 words are spelt correctly.
3. No punctuation.
4. Background information - who/what included.
Interest:
1. Main idea + 2 details.
2. Descriptive language 1 example.
3. Expressive language - 1 example.
4. Personal comments - 1 example.
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