He was so fantastic he made a bird apear in the box but we sore what was in the box and all that was in there was a stik. El Grego blowed me away and the snow trik was impressave because he made snow out of his hands the show was so cool I wish I can watch him again.
By Cheyenne.
Great to see you're working hard on your 'blog day' Cheyenne. Keep working at making sense when you write - you are nearly there. Spelling is just about perfect and punctuatio is accurate (nice use of !!!).
ReplyDeleteI love the language (eg, "fantastic", "...blew me away...", "impressive) - excellent work. Writing about one thing that happened (like the bird trick) and telling the reader what happened one moment at a time is your next step.
Teach
I can read your enthusiasm for the magic show in this post Cheyenne. Well done keep working hard.
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