In our family we love the farm because we love the animals, we have a dog /cows /sheep and more. My sheep name is Sally and my dogs are Snow and Luke. I love all the animals on the farm. We go to the farm in the weekend.It is my Nana and poppas farm,we have to shift the cows for poppa and Nana. But in the week I stay at my mums house so I can go to school in the week. I go to stoke school, my friends are Will / Rhys / Marcus and Owen.
BY JONTEE
Well done Jontee! Your writing is easy to understand and you have worked hard on accurate spelling and simple punctuation. Make sure you use commas to list things (eg, "...a dog, cows, sheep and more.").
ReplyDeleteI like how you are starting to write about one main idea, and adding details, at a time. I'd love to hear about what you get up to when you're on the farm.
Teach
The farm is such a good topic for you to write about because you seem to know all about it. How do you shift cows? I think they look too heavy to pick up. (Well for me anyway, you must be strong.)
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