Yesterday it was the house day competition I'm in oamio. Oamio is the red house it is about going in groups, there are four groups yellow, green, blue, red.We did four activities.My favourite active was when we went in the pool and had a race with the lilo. At the end all the house groups had a tug of war,the adults won against the kids.
well i almost for got to introduce myself my name is Amy. My favourite bit about having a house day is just all about having fun and I like wearing my house day colours are the colours of your house group house day is so awesome you should do it with your school
Great post Amy! I like the part where you say that you like wearing house colours. Also the part where you encourage other people to do the same!
ReplyDeleteGood to see this post published Amy. You have made an effort to make sure the reader understands your writing. Making sense, spelling and punctuation are all fairly accurate.
ReplyDeleteI like your intro, it introduces all the background info the reader needs to know and your favourite activity. What happened to telling us the interesting details about what happened in the pool and what made it an activity to remember? I like your conclusion where you encourage other schools to have house days too.
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