By Rosa
Ya ya ya Its the last day of school today.
It's Easter on Friday eg-eg-eggschocolate eggs. Easter bunny is coming. I think the Easter bunny looks big and fat because he eats lots of easter eggs and he has long ears and has big short pants and a black t-shirt. I think he has slaves that are chickens.
Im going to Australia Australia Australia ya. Me Rosa going to Australia to see my cousins for the frst time it's a bit like missing pieces if you know what I mean (its a program) my mum has all redey (ready) booked the flite (flight).
You do sound eggcited Rosa. Opps Excited! Wow a trip to Australia will be great fun. Have a good time and come back and tell us all about it.
ReplyDeleteYou sent Mr T two emails who sent them to me Rosa. That's why it took me a week to post them. Both emails were about the holidays so I posted them together as one story. I also organised them into paragraphs (Intro/ Easter/Australia).
ReplyDeleteYou've written about both main ideas in great detail. I love the descriptive language ("long ears and big short pants...") and the expressive language ("if you know what I mean...").
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