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Mr T is impressed! I like the line "The big river monsters live". I love your appropriate elephant simile. Mostly I love your onomatopoeia EEW! Oh, and the photo shows your experience is real and that you are living life!
Wonderful poem Georgia. I wonder what our poet expert Mr T will think?
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Mr T is impressed! I like the line "The big river monsters live". I love your appropriate elephant simile. Mostly I love your onomatopoeia EEW! Oh, and the photo shows your experience is real and that you are living life!
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