Slam!!!

By Cheyenne

"OW OW OW NO" Slam!!!


"Man that was tiaring." did you know the obstikill is a fote (foot) hiy (high). man I was blabaring (blubbering) so mush I fall of and the bike landid on me. Harve (half) the class whent and Rictte and whent out there. R11 learn't to keep your fet on the pediles and stay on your bike.


Befor I whent biking I was abit nervis. Once you will not beleve it but I've been over the hands (handle bars) and it was not prity. I'v got skars and skrachis. But I gave it a chriyed (tried?) it and I was so happy I got thereow it but I'm stil sorer.


"Well" there is a nather roll (rule) and you will whant to know. you need to know how to stay on your bike and your fete needs to stay on your bike.

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This is a writing test. Students were given 45 minutes to plan and draft a story recounting the best, or worst, thing that happened to them during Cycle Safety. The stories are assessed as 'draft writing' for how well they have been written for 'readers' understanding' and 'readers' interest'.

Readers' Understanding:

1. Grammar (making sense).
2. Accurate spelling.
3. Accurate punctuation
4. Background information (making sense).

Readers' Interest:

1. Writes about one main idea in detail at a time.
2. Uses descriptive language.
3. Uses language features (expressive language).
4. Uses personal comments.

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What Cheyenne Thinks About Room 11 Blog!

By Cheyenne

In room 11 we have a online blog, we use 11s blog to help us write BUT WE HAVE TO MAKE IT MAKE SEENS!!! Its a bit heard for me. So now I need to make seens  right  now!!!

(Can you please comet.)

El grego the magcian

Last Thursday night a magician came over and hes name is EL GREGO!!!
He was so fantastic  he made a bird apear  in the box but we sore  what was in the box and all that was in there was a stik. El Grego blowed  me away and the snow trik was impressave  because he made snow out of his hands the show was so cool I wish I can watch him again.


By Cheyenne.

(please comet.)

Gess Whow,yes its me Cheyenne

I have brown eyes and Brown hair I like to swim. I like
to play sport.Yes its me Cheyenne I like to swim like
a mermaid.I like to play different sport like ripper rugby
touch is fun to but I like ripper beater.I like to play
soccer and basket boll and I like to play with my friends
         so that's all I can tale you about me

                     By Cheyenne

The Party

On Friday night my family and I went to my cousins
party, we got to play on the bouncy castle it was so fun.
There where drinks and food they where good. But me and Tanykah
had to go to ripper rugby it was a lucky day because we won
the game.They got 14 tries and the other team got 7.
On Saturday my dad played a game of tackle rugby and it was a
bad day to play a game but they handled it.When me and my
friends where playing a game of tackle rugby and these dum
boys came over and says naughty words so I said go away but they didn't go so we left and got a pie it was delicious.
                 
                  By Cheyenne                     

Under the sea

Hi my name is Cheyenne I am going to talk to you about what is in the sea
there are alto of different fish in the sea and there Are scary fish in the sea
like a shack they are scary  gels fish are to they can sting you like a sting ray
I thirty there were dogfish but I dealt that but there are catfish the cat fish are cool
because it has a Masters on there fays
my dad Cash's lots of Cindi's of fish he cashes paw and it is spectacular but when you
look at it when it is alive so that is Wye I love my dad and one thing I forgot to
tell you the parana are a deadly fish so don't go Nerte a Purana

Under the sea

BY CHEYENNE

Hi my name is fish diver what my name is Cheyennes. I am  going to talk to you about want is in the sea.
there are alto of different fish in the waiter there are scary fish in the waiter like
a shacks wail a Parana a  gel fish and sting rays. BUT if you don't know about sting ray well you don't be Maen our you will make it mad and you don't touch the tail iv close you know because
if you haven't Sean one on TV I will talk to you and. I like under the sea because
my dad daos diving and caching fish pawar diving is in my life because 

Fantastic Fast Freestyle

Take your mark! Set! Bang! Splash! Dolphin dive into the pool. Stoke School's swimming sports freestyle final heat. There were three of us bullets shooting to the end of the pool.

There's Georgia on the right!

I was pumping my arms to try and beat Georgia. Georgia is my friend and she's about two seconds faster than me. I kept bumping into Georgia and she kept bumping into me. She's ahead of me and then I'm ahead of her. We finally get close to the end.  My arms were getting so tired but I reached out with my hand and touched the wall. I came second but Georgia came first.

What a horrendous finish

By Cheyenne

House Day

Every once in a while Stoke School has a house competition. There is Omaio, the red house, Ngawhatu, the green house, Songer, the yellow house, and Marsden, the blue house. I'm in the red house. Yesterday we had a House Fun Day. We got to have a tug of war. It was exciting.

Check out a Ngawhatu's team winning their tug of war in this video.
Owen

You should have seen Miss Kemp when she was wearing a bee costum.  Man it was fun!  House day is cool but it's sad it's only on once a term.  I wish it was on every week because of the screaming and the yelling in my ears.

Cheyenne

Once a term there is a thing called House Day.  There are 4 house groups Omiao is red, Songer is yellow, Nafatu is green and Marsden is blue.  I'm in Songer House.

The best part of House Day was all the noise  there were some people saying, "green will, green will, rock you", "Songer yellow!!!", "blue, blue blue blue!" and, "red stripes!"  It was loud!  Everybody wears there house group today.

Zaria

It all starts after morning tea at Stoke School.  It is the first House Fun Day of the year.  On House Fun Day you dress yourself up in your house colour that the teachers gave us.  The house colours are red (Omaio), blue (Marsden), yellow (Songer) and green (Ngawhatu).  Ngawhatu won (the first year - 2010) and got their name engraved on a trophfy that was made especially.

Ciarna

On Wensday 15th Feb it was House Day.  We have four house colers red, blue,green, yellow.  House Day is when we play gams in the pool on the feald on the cort.  In the pool we did lilo relay races.  on the feald we did a scavenger Hunt and water relay.  On the cort we did a Blind Fold game.  My faverit one was the races in the pool.  after all the gams and Rellays we Had tug of war game all four Houses did tug of war.

Larissa

I am in Omaio Red.  My favourite part of the day was the challenge in the pool.  The pool challenge was in our School pool and we had 4 horses from both teams and I was one of them.  We used big floating seats in the pool and we had to pull as many people as we wanted over to the other side of the pool.

Sarah

Woah!  That was a blast!  Every term we have a House Day when the whole of Stoke School gets out and joins together as a big group.  After we join together we get into our 4 house groups.  Ngawhatu the green house, Omaio the red house, Marsden the blue house and songer the yellow house.  Im in the green house.  Everyone dressed up in there house colour so they could score points for thier house group.  My favourite part was when we did the scavenger hunt with Mr Logan.

Shimya