I have a lot of friends! There names are Olivia, Nikayla, Laita, Talia Anna, Juila and Carina. Every week morning we all useally soccer with the boys. The boys are a lot better at soccer then us so we try to get the ball of them. Me and Nikayla like to go for bike rides together. Nikayla and I just go around the block but that is ok. Taila and Latia are twins so it is hard to tell them apart!!! We like to play soccer in the morning. Me and Olivia and been friends for a long time. Some times my family comes down to the school to the some sort of sport or game and Olivia aways comes or she trys to. Me and Carina do St.Johns together. Anna and I play sporttogether and Julia 
comes down to the school and we also play sport.
By Georgia
I love your post Georgia.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds really interesting.
By Shimya
Your writing is always interesting Geogia. I'd like you to work on paragraphing. This will highlight all the great things you do when you write.
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1. Intro - Friends
Lots!
Different friends/different things
Some play morning soccer (where?)
2. Different friends/different things
Nikayla/twins/Olivia/Ciarna/Anna/Julia
(the details about what you do together)
3. Morning soccer
(details)
4. Conclusion
(repeat your main message/personal comment)
You already know what to write about Georgia. This just helps you to organise your writing in a way that makes it easy for the reader to follow.
Teach
Excellent. If you follow the outline Mr Goad sets you. Your posts will be brilliant! Very easy to read Georgia.
ReplyDeleteok thank you
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