Toria invited Georgia, Anna and Me but then Anna couldn't go because she was in Roturua with her family. At the Wave Rave the waves in the wave pool are bigger then they are every other day and in the lane pool they put up a obstacle coarse that we have to try and get over, only some people get over the obstacle coarse, at the end it is not stable and that's were people fall off.
We saw heaps of people that we knew there hear are the people that we saw Nikayla, Melissa, Amy, Jontee, Adam, Mattew, Brayden and Torias cousin Torin. We were aloud in all of the pools there even the adults spa.
Parents were not aloud to go they were only aloud to drop us off and pick us up. They did alot of activity's there one of the activity's was in the pool where you have swimming lessons and it was the best and longest handy stand, if you won you got a prize and the other activity was jumping off the top of wave pools deep end and if yours was the best jump you also won a prize.
I had alot of fun at Toria's birthday hopfully I get in vited next year.By Olivia!!!
That is an excellent post Olivia. You go into a good deal of detail to explain to people what happens.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr T!!!
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Nice writing Olivia. Still waiting to see an introduction, main ideas (with supporting relevant details), and an introduction organised into paragraphs. Grammar, most of the spelling, and punctuation are as accurate as usual.
ReplyDeleteWe'll talk about using hyperbole (exaggeration) to add interest for the writer. Lots of interesting details. I'd love to know what you thought about "no parents allowed" rule.
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