Food for thougt By Lillee
On Wednesday 28 of March Room 11 went to New world. For food for thought and Marwin a lady from Christchurch witch is a person who does stuff with food and tales you what you should eat and be health.And. On Tuesday the day before.Marwin came to our class we did a food permit and we hat to go home and do our own food permit & I loved going to New world with my class.
Good post Lillee, what is a food permit? i like the photographs you included.
ReplyDeleteSome of what you are saying in the post is a little unclear Lillee. You also need to tell the reader about one thing that happened on the trip in detail to improve the interest for the reader.
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Ps, I love the title (even more if each word in the title started with a capital letter). But if the title is "Food For Thought", I'd expect to read about how we have to think about the food we eat more and why.
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nice photo lillee!!!!!!!!!.
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