This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted.
If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
Great to see your first post online Ricky. You get a tick for making sense. It does need to be editted for spelling mistakes and punctuation that isn't there (capital letters and full stops).
I do know that you're quite sporty Ricky. Your writing makes clear sense which is a good start. Don't forget to proofread and edit for spelling and punctuation and THEN conference with a buddy before publishing.
Details about why you like rugby would add more interest.
Wow, I did not realize that you were so sporty Ricky.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see your first post online Ricky. You get a tick for making sense. It does need to be editted for spelling mistakes and punctuation that isn't there (capital letters and full stops).
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I do know that you're quite sporty Ricky. Your writing makes clear sense which is a good start. Don't forget to proofread and edit for spelling and punctuation and THEN conference with a buddy before publishing.
ReplyDeleteDetails about why you like rugby would add more interest.
Teach
i dont think you play net ball
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