On the fifteenth of February Stoke School had a house challenge. Our colours are Omaio Red,Marsden Blue,Nafatu Green and Songer Yellow.Each house has two different groups. My favourite part of the day was the pool challenge. I am in Omaio Red. My favourite part of the day was the challenge in the pool.
For the pool activitie we used our School pool and we had four horses from each team and I was one of them. We used big floating beds in the pool as transporters to the other side of the pool.We could take as may people as we wanted across at a time. We won that challenge! The worst challenge for me was the Obstacle course.In that course we had partners and one had a blind fold on and the other had to guide you around the obstacles. If you get to the other side of the course you get one point for your house. We also won that one. My second favourite activities was the scavenger hunt. The scavenger hunt is were your group has to find out what the answers to the questions are. For some questions you would have run around the school to find out the answers. We won that challenge aswell!!
By Sarah
I am in Marsden Blue! It was a good day and the pool relay sure was fun!
ReplyDeleteI like that your introduction gives some background information and introduces the main idea that the pool challenge was your favourite part of the day. Good start! You've made a fairly good job of writing accurately (spelling/punctuation/grammar) for reader's understanding. Just a bit of spelling and grammar to tidy up.
ReplyDeleteChoosing to write about your favourite part of the day to interest the reader was a good idea. I expected to read all the juicy details of what happened to make it your favourite challenge though. Then you could have chosen intensely interesting and imaginative language to paint a picture in words for the reader.
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