I have lots of fights with my sister guest who wins the older one wins. My cat attacks me if I annoy him it hurts!! My cat is important to me because we had lots of Bunny rabbits that's why we called our cat Bunny. My cat has soft fur. My family is important to me because I love them and they love me but the worst part is when I have fights with my sisters. I now still love me though we have fights. my dad has alot of tattos he comes from samoa. My mum has no tattos.
Thank you for letting me talk to you about my family and my pet cat. Don't forget my cats name.
By Latia
Thank you for writing the blog post so that I could read it, otherwise I would not know that your cat is called Bunny!
ReplyDeleteI can see lots of ways you have improved your writing Latia. The post makes sense most of the time and your spelling is fairly accurate. A lot of the punctuation is accurate too but some mistakes cause problems with understanding what you want to say.
ReplyDeletePersonal comments add interest and you have added lots of details. Try to choose one idea at a time to write about in detail.
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