This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted. If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
28 Mar 2012
Super markeit trip with room 11.
Today room11 went to the Super Market.We got a sheet we went in groups of five and we had to write down the name , how much energy is in it and the fat total,how much sugar is in it,and how much fibre is in it ,and sodium. Our group got bread,drinks,cereald,snack foods and dariy products.Heart tick products you can eat every day.By Amy.
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Great work Amy. Easy for me to understand what you were looking at.
ReplyDeleteGreat detail about what the "sheet" was for Amy. You just need to plan what you are going to write about rather than writing down everything you can think of as you think of it.
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