23 Mar 2012

my life with three brothers

I have blue eyes,blond hear longish cerly. I have three brothers two live with me and mum in nelson & one lives up North with my dad & stepmum. when me & my brother stay my big brother sleeps in my little brother Tyrones room & i sleep in my dads bed till he comes to bed . Then wen he comes to bed he wakes me up or carys me to the cowch        by larissa
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  1. Unknown23 March 2012 at 18:06

    Well done Larissa, this is an early post of yours!

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  2. Eleven On-Line27 March 2012 at 12:09

    Welcome back online Larissa. Your writing makes sense and spelling and punctuation are fairly accurate. Some editting of spelling and punctuation mistakes is still needed.

    I'm not sure the first sentence had anything to do with the rest of the post but I like how you have written about your brothers and added lots of details for interest. I have 4 brothers and used to share a bedroom with 2 of them until I was 12 or 13.

    Teach

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