This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted.
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Our awsome teacher called Mr Tompson he is our techno boss hes really speachle to us
we like him in lots of ways he is in charg of th i pads and he fixs the laptops
hae cind in meany ways and he ist he best.
By Zaria
Ah, you are too kind by half Zaria. (but you can have the best seat at Lunch next Friday. (Other people will need to look at the Stoke School outdoor lunch area to understand this comment)).
Make that three posts in 90 minutes Zaria. This post is not quite as accurate as your last two. You need to edit to make sense a little more clearly ("he fixes the laptops hae cind in meany ways" - it's hard to work out what you mean). I'm also going to have to insist that you proofread, edit and THEN conference with a buddy before publishing further posts.
Ah, you are too kind by half Zaria. (but you can have the best seat at Lunch next Friday. (Other people will need to look at the Stoke School outdoor lunch area to understand this comment)).
ReplyDeleteMake that three posts in 90 minutes Zaria. This post is not quite as accurate as your last two. You need to edit to make sense a little more clearly ("he fixes the laptops hae cind in meany ways" - it's hard to work out what you mean). I'm also going to have to insist that you proofread, edit and THEN conference with a buddy before publishing further posts.
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