By Zivana
A feiw weeks ago on Wednesday we hade to shift all of our stuff to room nine then we hade to put every thing back away where it would fit and look right .The next day the class was still not right.We were squeezed in because there was not much room . But on Thurday every thing had some were to go.We hade to shift because our class room 11 was geting bilt bigger.
On friday room11 was redy to be bilt bigger.On Monday the bilders were ready to bild .We have been hearing all of the men making the class bigger.We look through the fence at the bilders.We will not be back in our class for a while! theyn made two littil holes in our wall.
I think it will be exciting for you to go back to your room Zivana.
ReplyDeleteGood work Zivana. I like that you are writing for the reader's understanding. Your post makes sense, you have spent time on the spelling, punctuation is just about spot on, and you are using paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you adding detail for the readers interest too. Try adding personal comments (eg, 'I giggle quietly every time Mr Goad starts to say something and the builders start making a racket at the same time.').
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