Shoulder length light brown hair with blue eyes ,
Thats me my name is Amy I enjoy kayaking on a sunny day with my Dad. The best place Ive been is the Able tasman national park.kayaking is my idea of paradises.it is cool paddling in the beautiful blue water.
I also have an interest in tennis but I need some more practises.I play with my family and like to hit the ball up and throw it up again.I normally go to the tennis courts in the afternoons on a cool day I hope to keep it up.
Sometimes I wonder if I will ever be able to kayak around the whole world and become a champion ship tennis player.
Go Amy! Live your dream!
ReplyDeleteYour first post on the blog is a winner Amy. It is a very accurate (spelling, punctuation and grammar)story, so it is very easy to read (understand).
ReplyDeleteYour writing is interesting because it is personal ("Kayaking is my idea of paradise") and honest (I also have an interest in tennis but I need some more practice"). We know exactly how you feel about kayaking and tennis.
You are also starting to add relevant details to add even more interest for the reader. Keep it up!
Teach