Today we went to the Super Market. And we got a sheet and we had to find foods like every day food and occaslonal food and food with a tick on it. It was alot of fun.We had groups I had smart people with me. We where going our hades. And then we had to get out of the Super Market and wait out side the Super Market for the others. By Will
I like that you include the supermarket logo Will. What does it mean "We where going our hades"? oh, is it "We were going our hardest" ? If you were going your hardest then well done. Maybe your group was first.
ReplyDeleteEvery word in the title needs a capital letter Will.
ReplyDeleteThe reader needs enough background information to understand what's going on. Why did we go to the supermarket? What sort of "sheet"? Why would food have a "tick on it"?
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