28 Mar 2012

Basketball

This may sound boring but I like it .My name is Maia and I have a Passion for basketball.It is my favourite sport and I'm been playing it for 2 years.I will probable be playing it for another 3 years.
I love basketball and I'm never ever never going to stop playing.

By Maia



2 comments:

  1. Wohooo! Nice post! I love the purple and really like the extent of your passion for your favourite game.

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  2. Doesn't sound boring to me Maia. How about an attention grabbing first sentence to make sure the reader knows it's not boring (eg, 'Basketball is more than just a game, it's a passion for me and millions of others!").

    The post is short but it makes sense, spelling is accurate and punctuation is mostly correct (the title of your post and the word "Passionate" need editting).

    Teach

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