This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted. If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
Wohooo! Nice post! I love the purple and really like the extent of your passion for your favourite game.
ReplyDeleteDoesn't sound boring to me Maia. How about an attention grabbing first sentence to make sure the reader knows it's not boring (eg, 'Basketball is more than just a game, it's a passion for me and millions of others!").
ReplyDeleteThe post is short but it makes sense, spelling is accurate and punctuation is mostly correct (the title of your post and the word "Passionate" need editting).
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