My name is Will and I love rugby. Last year I played under 10s and this year I'm playing under 11s. My dad is practising with me. acall halps me to they are good at rugby some times I go to my casins and I play rugby with him its really fun some times I go to tuhowna feld and I do push ups and do some running so I get fit some times I am to lazy and dad says get up you lazy boy. ok ruby am I have always wanted to be half back but no im wig its fun being wig to I just whonted to be half back because I wonted to be like Piri Wepoo hey is cool. by Will
Great to see you adding interesting details to each main idea Will. It is a little hard to understand some parts of the post because of spelling mistakes and grammar (making sense). If you missed these things when you proofread (once to make sure your writing made sense, a second time for spelling, and a third time for punctuation), your conference buddy should have seen the mistakes.
ReplyDeleteDid you proofread and conference with a buddy?
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