Every day children think that sandpit is just a sandpit but its not what you think it is, its a big ugly sand monster with an ungly appitite.This big ugly thing is not cool he eats shops,trees and books and thats really weird!I dont think hes a mean sand monster I think hes a good sand monster and just wants a friend and some proper food not trees,shops and books thats just rong but why does he have an ugly appitite.''Mmm''I think it might be all the junk hes been eating and because hes just well sand.I shall make him a silk heart,be his friend and give him proper foods like chicken,fies and fruit and vegtables.''Good morning sand monster I brouhgt a silk heart and some roast and vegtable and I was wondering if you want to be my friend ''Rrrrr'' so I guss thats a yes ''Rrr'' ok you eat up sand monster and ill be back soon ''Rrr Rrr'' okay bye.''Im back sand monster'' where are you sand monster?''SAND MONSTER WHERE ARE YOU!!!!''.I will just ring sand monster then.RING,RING,RING ''rrr rr rrrrr rr rrrr rrrr please take a message after this beep BEEP'' man that gave me a fright.I better go serch for him he might be in great danger. ''SAND MONSTER WHERE ARE YOU!!!!''.I will just ring sand monster then.RING,RING,RING ''rrr rr rrrrr rr rrrr rrrr please take a message after this beep BEEP'' man that gave me a fright.i better go find him I wonder where he is he might be in great danger.
By Ciarna
Ciarna, you have such a wonderful way with words. Your writing is so unique. It is so "you".
ReplyDeleteYour best post by far Ciarna! You have worked hard on making sense, spelling and punctuation. So the reader is able to understand what you want to say easily.
ReplyDeleteThat means the reader is able to enjoy your original, imaginative and totally interesting idea about our sandpit. I like your way with words too.
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