27 Mar 2012

Ricky At The Wave Pool And Fun

On the 25th of march I went to the aquatic centre. I was in the spa pool drinking L.M.P then I saw my friend Te haupai.We got a turtle surfboard.Man it was so fun but Waite my day just got better and better. after 2 hours of fun at the aquatic centre I went to McDonald's for lunch I had A big mac combo I was really fool airfare my McDonald 's then I went to my sister's I picket up my niffu on my go kart.  Then I went to my brothers and I toke my niffu to the park. and  we went back on the go kart.         By Ricky
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  1. Unknown27 March 2012 at 15:47

    Sounds like you had a good day with your nephew. Good post Ricky.

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  2. Eleven On-Line28 March 2012 at 21:26

    Your writing is getting better and better Ricky. Making sense, spelling and punctuation are pretty accurate. You are even including background info so the reader knows what is going on.

    I also love all the interesting details and personal comments (eg, "Man it was so fun...").

    Teach

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