
By Georgia.
This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted. If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
Hey Georgia. Anklets are the thing are they. I don't have one. Is that good or bad? @0 metres seems very long to me, are you sure?
ReplyDeleteSigh! You need to work on quality not quantity Georgia. I like the idea and the beginning sentence. Then there is problems with making sense and not much to read.
ReplyDeleteI'd rather you wrote one post each week that showed your writing was improving than 5+ posts that you don't spend much time planning and/or write quickly with little effort.
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