Hi im a cat lover, cats are my favourite animals. I have cat this and cat that so that must mean a cat party. Cats are the best cats meow not bark I like this cat because... Its colour full I also like colour full. Did you know cats have over one life. by Hayley
I like cats too. Really? Over one life? Is that good or bad?
ReplyDeleteThe first sentence had me interested (apart from the "hi"). The expressive language and humour of the second sentence had me hooked! It was all so easy to understand too (they made sense and spelling and punctuation was spot on).
ReplyDeleteIf you had written another paragraph about your cat/cats, adding interesting details, and using expressive humourous language I would have stayed hooked and loved every second of it!
Teach