Rugby is my favourite sport. If you wached the world cup you would see how mach effert those All Blacks do its crazy. It was because they tryed there hards at practice so they can keep there confidins up. When the All Blacks were in the world cup I coundint believe NZ didint lose a game.
By Will
i like it so far will
ReplyDeletegreat post Will! Those All Blacks did put in a great effort, didn't they.
ReplyDeleteA short but sweet post Will! Your accuracy (making sense, spelling and punctuation), to make it easy for the reader to understand you, is improving. You've also used a little bit of expressive language (it's crazy") and personal comment ("I couldn't believe NZ didn't lose a game") to add interest for the reader.
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