This is Room 11's blog (class of 2012). 11Online/2012 gives us a chance to write for an actual audience (reality writing). The main goal is to improve our writing over the year. We will continue to proof read, edit and improve our posts even after they have been posted.
If you want to read more about who we are, our blog goals, and our school, check out our blog page 'About Us'.
Welcome back online Ricky. This is a big improvement on your first 2 posts. I like the effort you've put into proofreading and editting. The post is very easy to understand.
I'd love to read more details about what its like when you're going "really fast".
Yeah, love the picture of you on your dirt bike Ricky. Ace man. Did you beat your brother?
ReplyDeleteWelcome back online Ricky. This is a big improvement on your first 2 posts. I like the effort you've put into proofreading and editting. The post is very easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to read more details about what its like when you're going "really fast".
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