By Zivana
Hi i m' nine years old quite short. I have long blonde/brown hair i 'm called Zivana. I have five peopol in my family. we have got acat and some fish. irealy like cats.
I've got two younger brothers Shay is six he is in room 3 and we go to Stoke School. Levi is all most three and he goes to Playcentre. My Dad drives a truck . He has two trucks his friend drives one and he drives the other. Mum looks after levi as well as doing the office work for the trucks. We have a cat called Shadow she is a black female. I realy like cats i would love to play with Shadow like a kitten but she is a adult cat. We also have some fish. The fish are siting up on the bench and Shadow does not know they are there . Shadow likes to come and sit on my bed when i go to my room she comes with me most of the time. She always scrach the carpit .Mum claps her hands or stames her foot somtime she still wont stop so she lifts her up and tells her offand says NO SHADOW . If I am in my room and shadow cant find me she comes to my room and lays on my bed . We have eight fish the one I like the best is raskill . I have had her for five years this years. when one of my fish dides we get anther.
Hi Zivana, Shadow is a great name for a cat! How do the fish get on with the cat?
ReplyDeleteMake sure you proofread and edit your writing Zivana. Then conference with a buddy to proofread for you. There's too many basic mistakes that make too much of your post hard to understand (eg, "..and Live is almost and he goes to Playcentre."
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