Feeling Pretty Good

By Will

Woho I've got nothing to worrie about. We were doing it at the cycle safty course at the front field. But sadly it was a windy day.

On the skinny course I was getting ready and I said to my self I'm to good and then...BOOM!!! BOOM!!! My front tyer goes first then my back tyer. Oh no I fell of I was going to fast.

Mr Clark said remember to slow down.

I got back up and did my best.

I was feeling pretty good.

xxxxxxx

This is a writing test. Students were given 45 minutes to plan and draft a story recounting the best, or worst, thing that happened to them during Cycle Safety. The stories are assessed as 'draft writing' for how well they have been written for 'readers' understanding' and 'readers' interest'.

Readers' Understanding:

1. Grammar (making sense).
2. Accurate spelling.
3. Accurate punctuation
4. Background information (making sense).

Readers' Interest:

1. Writes about one main idea in detail at a time.
2. Uses descriptive language.
3. Uses language features (expressive language).
4. Uses personal comments.

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Super markit trip

Today we went to the Super Market. And we got a sheet and we had to find foods like every day food and occaslonal food and food with a tick on it. It was alot of fun.We had groups I had smart people with me. We where going our hades. And then we had to get out of the Super Market and wait out side the Super Market for the others. By Will

Soccer

Every Tuesday my soccer team has a game of soccer. last Tuesday we lost ageist Nalend it was a hard game but we had a lot of fun. that was the only  game we lost we thort we were gonere win  but we will win next time.ByWill

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WEET-BIX TRYATHLON

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FAMILY FUN NIGHT

Last night Stoke School had a night were you could go  on cool games  like a water slide and bring your family along to. and theres  fun  games on the  tiger turf like basket ball other games. there was a free sausage sizzle and ice blocks for us to eat. we played tackle rugby with big kids we lost by two it was a hard game we went back home at 7.00 I was tired after the night I had a lot of  fun.and we had a swim and it was fun in there and I did a ford flip in to the pool .and are principal said about the new tiger turf and then we walked home. Then I went to my friends to get my scooter and left to go home.

By Will and Jontee