I Love Holidays

By Emily

My name is Emily and I love holidays.

Last year I went to golden bay with my nana and pop. In there (their) caravan we stayed 4 days it was lots of fun.

Iv also been to Wellington with my mum wen I was a baby. I cant remember the trip but I wish I cood (could) and I have been to piton (Picton). there was a big pool wear (where) I stayed there.

All Shook Up

By Emily


Cycle Safety is to help wen you are Bikeing on the road. ConstBel galen (Constable Garland) Puts out All Sorts of opstkills (obstacles) out. You have to get thow (through) no (on) Your Bike. ConstBel ganlen maded a road to tech (teach) the class the road rels (rules). I wasint Sure wich way to go wen I fist went on it. But then I got the hang of i't. my favote (favourite) opstkill was at the ramp I loved raceing over it I All So Liked the Logs. there were a line of Logs and You had to ride over them fastily (fast or quickly) no Your Bike. wen You rid over them it rily saked (shook) You up. Oh sh-sh shot that was All I coid (could) Say before I smaket (smacked) to the grond wen I rid them!


I no (know) I'm not to good at Bikeing now But I will Be Some Day.

xxxxxxx

This is a writing test. Students were given 45 minutes to plan and draft a story recounting the best, or worst, thing that happened to them during Cycle Safety. The stories are assessed as 'draft writing' for how well they have been written for 'readers' understanding' and 'readers' interest'.

Readers' Understanding:

1. Grammar (making sense).
2. Accurate spelling.
3. Accurate punctuation
4. Background information (making sense).

Readers' Interest:

1. Writes about one main idea in detail at a time.
2. Uses descriptive language.
3. Uses language features (expressive language).
4. Uses personal comments.

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My Cats

My name is Emily and Im going to talk to you about my cats I have 2 cats called stalla and bella stalla is 1 and bella is 3 I got bella for my birthday and stalla for my brothers birthday stalla like to sleep with me bella likes to sleep with my brother I rilley want to have a pet day at my school so I can bring them.  by Emily

Rubby World Cup.

My name is Emily and I love rubby I was thrilled when fond out that the All blacks had won the wold cup. when I woched it on tv I made a All blacks flag out of paper. my dad seremed at the tv when the All blacks did ther last kick. after thay won Richey Micore haled up the cup to show the crowed. evrey won claped I hope the All blacks win it nexed time.  by Emily.

Short Posts by Email

Too many students and not nearly enough classroom computers is a particularly prickly problem! Room 11's solution is to use iPads to write their posts and email them to Teach. These are the test posts students have emailed to find out how well the solution works. Enjoy!


Emily
By Emily

Hi my name is Emily and I'm going to talk to you about me I am 1 of 4 kids my dad is called Paul he techers at my school. My mum is called fee I have 3 broth's and 2 cats and 2 rats my best friend is called rosa I am 9 and a year 5 at stoke school. The coolest thing I like to do is swimming evey day I come home from school and watch my coolest program h2o then I go to feed my pets so that's all about me.

Hi my name is Emily and I'm going to talk to you all about new Zealand . New Zealand is the only pace with kwiws. And we invented the pavlover did you know that mores fond new Zealand fist and we are known for our good food . A well know plant to new Zealand is the fron


My Name is Rosa
By Rosa

My name is Rosa. My friends are called Emily / Haley / Maia / Lillee.Haley has 20 fish /  1cat /1dog /1bededdragin / 2brids. Emily has 2 cats and 2 ginny pigs. Lillee has1 fish. Sarah has 2 cats/1wild rabbit. I have 1 dog.

Hi my name is Rosa. My favite program is h2o. H2o was made in astraleya at water world. I am going they soon .my best friends Favite program is also h2o. We love it.

Hi my name is Rosa . I love animals a lot so thas my best friend . My best friend is called
Emily. Emily has two cats and two ginny pigs. One of Emilys ginny pigs is called flufey and
the ather one is called cinnamon. I have a puppy called pepper. Pepper is 1 year old.


Hey Drum Lovers!
By Georgia

Hey drum lovers my name is highhatrgia and my drum teachers name is Paulbasha of course my name is really Georgia and my drum teachers name is Paul. I like Paul because. He is so ingraining and when you are stuck he always says you can it. My dad has a drum kit so I play on that!

Swimming sports

Hi my name is Emily and I'm going to talk to you about swimming sports. At swimming sports the year 6s go first. I was nervous when Mr.Logan called out my name. for my fist race   my  dad  was   watching when  I  was  doing  a  length of over arm, and half a length of back stock.I swam a hole length think that I would win but I lost because the fastest year 5 swimmers.I came second in back stock because younger children.

By Emily